Lately James Franco has been worried that his art is too flat and and lacking in technical skill. In response he has re-dedicated himself to the craft of sculpting out of clay and spent all morning fine-tuning what he thinks might be his masterpiece - an over-sized statue of what Franco believes to be one of nature's greatest beauties.
"Fine-tuning" is a compound verb, needs a hyphen. Also, there are too (no pun intended) many Os in "to."
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